Wednesday, December 5, 2012


“60 seconds later” narrator said.
Alex was tightrope walking between  buildings.
He took another step, feeling the heat of the burning building behind him.  He tried not to rush, one wrong step and he could have a long fall to the ground.
He was in the middle of the wire. He didn’t try to think about his sooty sweaty hands that could possibly drop his counterweight. He was scared the roof behind him was melting and the pole that hold the wire was burning. He was almost there. a fire truck came  wheoooeooeing towards him.  He was a yard away.
 Suddenly all H-E double snooker sticks broke loose!  The roof exploded sending debris towards him. He ducked losing balance and dropping his balancing stick. The pole holding him snapped sending him falling towards the hard ground. “At least I tried,” he thought grabbing for the wire.  He grabbed it. Wham! The rope tightened out. Alex’s fairly short life flashed before his eyes. He Thought, “ Uggh! I should have never became a spy.” Alex was rammed against a window head first, breaking it.
He fell into the broken window unconscious and  lacerated.
I think this could happen because  Alex is very athletic and he always tries to try his hardest to survive. Also this could happened because there was a wire connecting the two buildings and the roof was going to burn. This reminds me of a person in  one of the twin towers while they were burning . Everyone tried to get out of the towers.  Plus this could happen because the roof was tar and that means it could melt. As well, I think this could happen because I read ahead after I wrote the prediction and this almost happened. 

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